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buff you got me thinking so I rewrote my script
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ok thank you buff you got me thinking so I rewrote
my script its a little better so here it go's agin
part:1(more to follow)
resident Evil: STARS

It starts at the end of the first.
Fore people in a train, it was 1 car inside but looked like 2 out side with an odd back, it had a square backing with a cross stitch in the middle of it.
It could lower to move cargo like crates or boxes that the train could not.
It begins with him,
"I cant go any faster well come off the tracks." Kaplin yells.
Just then the monster rips open the door next to kaplin and grabs him throwing him off the train as kaplin is thrown to the back of the train he grabs the bar on the top of the back just in time to see the licker.the licker then jumps on to the back casing it to lower to the tracks kaplin very hurt could not hold on as the the back went to the tracks kaplin let go of it then he hit the tracks barley missing the 3rd rail.
Alice shouts:"Matt open the door !"
Matt turns to see rain standing in front of him she was infected with the virus earlier she then cracks her neck and opens her eyes reviling she's a zombie after struggling for a bit but he manages to get her away from long enough to get the gun then he reluctantly shoots rain in the head.she fly's back hitting the button on the wall that opens the doors under the monster that Alice had it trapped on top of it, it then drops to the tracks hitting the third
rail and begins to burn as a result of the chemicals in its body.
A short time later the train stops Alice is sitting looking at rains body.
Matt then grabs her and says "weave got to go."
Alice responds "OK" Alice and Matt get out of the hive and then stop in a hallway and begin to talk.
as they are talking Matt's arm starts to hurt from the scratch he got from the licker.
Alice feeling responsible for the deaths of rain and the others try's to give him the antivirus but as she is about to give it to him 10 umbrella guys burst in and take Matt.
Alice tries to put up a fight to save Matt butt is to weak from the hole ordeal.
Then she is knocked out bye the umbrella agents as she and Matt are take away
A man begins to talk,
Jason: "reopen the hive I want to know what went on down their."
John:"sir the doors will be reopened. We will find out what went on down their."
Jason "yes we will john yes we will."
John leves the room.
Jason then picks up his cell phone and calls someone and then he says to the guy on the other line "Spencer came throw phase 2 is a go ahead."
The man on phone replis:"ok Jason I'll lure the team to the mansion in 3 weeks as planed.""ok see you in 36 hours" Jason says.
"maybe sooner," the man replies then hangs up the phone.
"what ,"Jason says."john get in here".
"Ok john send send them in"Jason says.
John:"yes sir ill send them in about 30 minutes OK?"
Jason:"ok".
The men go down in to the hive under the mansion along with john and Jason. They soon find the train inside they find rains body Jason tells a doctor to check her he then gets down and looks at her checking her eyes and says "she still alive!"
jason'"what?"
the man stands up and says to the other masked man "she the one in ten million. OK men rap her up she going to..."
"sir we have a survivor, he's barley alive but his wounds Arnet bad "a team member says.
masked man 1:"ok send him to Rockford Island the ashfords can use him"
jason:"what the hell are you talking about this.."masked man 2 cuts him off :"so what about her?"
as the man is removing his mask he says:"the city. send her to my lab."
Jason :"burkin I should have known."
burkin:"dont worry their all i need .OK men put them on the transport were laving"
man2:"jason you should have known we would be here."
jason:"you know no matter how man times i meet your still an *******."
Man2:"You better watch it I am a cop the stars could link you to this you know."
As he's Leaving the Man2 says:"oh by the way I sed maybe sooner."
Jason smirks and begins to go back to his office.
Once back in his office john tells Jason that the men have not reported in yet
Jason:"ok I'm going to go john I put you in charge of this."
John shocked says:"what about my men? "
Jason responds:"dont worry."
John:"oook sir when do you want the report on this?"
jason:"don't worry I'll see you around and then get it. OK?"
Jason then leaves the room and then leaves the site taking all 3 choppers with him leaving one truck to get the men out. A short time later John wonders about Jason but is interrupted by his men report. the first team has not reported in yet. He then sends in the other team butt as he's about to give the order he heres from the other team.
Team member :"their coming their coming close the hive close it!"
they all here the train coming down the track.
One man says:"the train is coming to fast it will DE rail."
John then looks thru his binoculars and sees the train butt what he sees scars him right to his soul.John finely able to say something screams:" oh **** men fall back ."
man2:"sir what's wrong?"
John hands the man his binoculars and says "look!"then runs up the stairs.
Man2 looks thru them and cant believe what he is seeing.
man3:"sir what is it?"
man2:"god help us."
the train then comes flying off the track coming in side ways killing 12men but if that is not bad enough the man3 knows now what was wrong with john and man 2.
the train was filled with zombies and hunters,chimeras,hounds,a
nd every thing else he could not believe he was seeing.
8 men get out of the hive john man2,3 , and 6 others get out to the mansion about 45 zombies,the dogs ,the chimeras, spiders, and snakes get out before man3 closes the door and is killed.
John sitting in front of a switch bored who has been up stars for 5 minutes or so yells :"kit help me do this ."kit(man2)yells back:"screw that lets get the hell out of here."
John screams:"no this will close the mansion if they get out were all fu**ed."
Kit agrees and then helps john begin the sequence to close mansion but john soon tells kit to run he has it kit does not want to leave but does so any ways as he runs fore the 1st dinning room he turns in time to see john get killed by zombies.
Kit then runs throw the mansion with the zombies following him they are to slow to ketch him but have gotten all over to mansion but luckily the sequence worked the mansions main floor started to shift a new stair case went in front of the one Alice and Matt where in at the end of the first. so now to the left and right is right are doors and the main hallway is now blocked off by the new stair case and the Ed dining room is sealed of from the rest of the mansion along with the hive (The hall way the umbrella guys where in at the end of the first when they took Matt out was in the middle the main hallway from the game it was taken down when Alice and Matt where taken out.)
the windows (the ones the mercenaries went threw in the first movie) took to longer to close a few zombies and dogs got out and will spread making more zombies and more dogs.
Their is now no way to get to the 2nd dining room ,the hallway, or the hive.
The hunters are stuck behind the main stair case.
The chimeras found the guard houses and stayed thair,the snakes went to the pool,and the spiders have gone all over the mansion and the guard house.
the mansion has locked all doors but one one in the front someone must have opened it maybe to get out.(kit)





3 weeks later,
a man is talking on an inter com: "Julia get a hold of all of the stars members tell them we have a mission"
Julia responds:"yes mr.Wesker."she the picks up rthe phone and begins to call the team.
Ringringrin.. Jill picks up the phone and says "hello?".
julia:"jill caption wesker has asked me to call all of the stars team.He wants you all to come down to the station"
jill:"yha problee just another exercise nothing ever happens in this town."
Julie :"uh Jill he's sending in bravo team in 40 minuets Edward to."
Jill:"ed to...OK tell him ill be there in 10 minuets"
Julie and Jill hang up.
Julie on the answering machine:"Chris Chris its your machine wake up! Chris hello?"chris answers the phone "Julie I hate it when you do that."
julie:"sorry did not mean to wake you at the butt crack of 7:40pm but Wesker wants the team in know.its not an exercise"
Chris drops the phone and leaves.
8:15pm
wesker:"ok weave waited for Chris long enough so heres y you are all here as you all know their have been a bizarre rash of murders near the woods on the outskirts of Ratcoon City. Now we think its a group of about ten men butgets cut off by Edward :"wesker I was enjoying a nice suspension and you call us in for news weave known fore weeks?".
"Their is a new development Ed ,"wesker says.
Wesker:"we have found out that their are several places in the woods they could hide(the 10 men) we have arranged fore bravo team to take a train that will circle the forest and stop near a mansion it could be the hide out. Bravo team will go in first.
Enrico:"ok when?"
wesker:"now "
enrico:" yes sir OK men suit up Ed,Kevin fire up the chopper."
Mean wile a few doors down Chris is getting something out of a vending machine.
Bravo team then passes by forest stops and says: "hi air force."chris responds:"hi redneck."
"what's going on "Chris asks?
Forest replies:"you know those murders that have been happing?"chris"yes forest ."
Forest:"well any ways we have a lead bravo team is going in. oh by the way look."he the points at Rebecca a new bravo team member and says:"shes only 18 you think Iv got a shot?"
Chris responds sharpley:"shes my sisters age OK and no not a chance in hell."
Forest:"sorry.I'v got to go now man bye."
Chris:"bye".
Ten minutes later Chris finally shows up and says:"sorry I'm late guys."
Wesker:"chris I know you live further away then anyone else butt put on your Syrin on next time and speed. Jill, berry brief Chris I'll see you at 19:00 hours. frost come with me I need to talk to you."

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sweet man, but i wasnt ACTUALLY serious!
i was expecting action later, but good job anyways.


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Much Better! Way to go dude!


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thank you guys and buff you wher right the first was bad

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HEY!

i never said it was bad!!!!


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ok i am trying this agin the first time i posted it did not show up so here it goes agin...
more to come very soon(my story).

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1985invt said:

ok thank you buff you got me thinking so I rewrote
my script its a little better so here it go's agin
part:1(more to follow)
resident Evil: STARS

It starts at the end of the first.
Fore people in a train, it was 1 car inside but looked like 2 out side with an odd back, it had a square backing with a cross stitch in the middle of it.
It could lower to move cargo like crates or boxes that the train could not.
It begins with him,
"I cant go any faster well come off the tracks." Kaplin yells.
Just then the monster rips open the door next to kaplin and grabs him throwing him off the train as kaplin is thrown to the back of the train he grabs the bar on the top of the back just in time to see the licker.the licker then jumps on to the back casing it to lower to the tracks kaplin very hurt could not hold on as the the back went to the tracks kaplin let go of it then he hit the tracks barley missing the 3rd rail.
Alice shouts:"Matt open the door !"
Matt turns to see rain standing in front of him she was infected with the virus earlier she then cracks her neck and opens her eyes reviling she's a zombie after struggling for a bit but he manages to get her away from long enough to get the gun then he reluctantly shoots rain in the head.she fly's back hitting the button on the wall that opens the doors under the monster that Alice had it trapped on top of it, it then drops to the tracks hitting the third
rail and begins to burn as a result of the chemicals in its body.
A short time later the train stops Alice is sitting looking at rains body.
Matt then grabs her and says "weave got to go."
Alice responds "OK" Alice and Matt get out of the hive and then stop in a hallway and begin to talk.
as they are talking Matt's arm starts to hurt from the scratch he got from the licker.
Alice feeling responsible for the deaths of rain and the others try's to give him the antivirus but as she is about to give it to him 10 umbrella guys burst in and take Matt.
Alice tries to put up a fight to save Matt butt is to weak from the hole ordeal.
Then she is knocked out bye the umbrella agents as she and Matt are take away
A man begins to talk,
Jason: "reopen the hive I want to know what went on down their."
John:"sir the doors will be reopened. We will find out what went on down their."
Jason "yes we will john yes we will."
John leves the room.
Jason then picks up his cell phone and calls someone and then he says to the guy on the other line "Spencer came throw phase 2 is a go ahead."
The man on phone replis:"ok Jason I'll lure the team to the mansion in 3 weeks as planed.""ok see you in 36 hours" Jason says.
"maybe sooner," the man replies then hangs up the phone.
"what ,"Jason says."john get in here".
"Ok john send send them in"Jason says.
John:"yes sir ill send them in about 30 minutes OK?"
Jason:"ok".
The men go down in to the hive under the mansion along with john and Jason. They soon find the train inside they find rains body Jason tells a doctor to check her he then gets down and looks at her checking her eyes and says "she still alive!"
jason'"what?"
the man stands up and says to the other masked man "she the one in ten million. OK men rap her up she going to..."
"sir we have a survivor, he's barley alive but his wounds Arnet bad "a team member says.
masked man 1:"ok send him to Rockford Island the ashfords can use him"
jason:"what the hell are you talking about this.."masked man 2 cuts him off :"so what about her?"
as the man is removing his mask he says:"the city. send her to my lab."
Jason :"burkin I should have known."
burkin:"dont worry their all i need .OK men put them on the transport were laving"
man2:"jason you should have known we would be here."
jason:"you know no matter how man times i meet your still an *******."
Man2:"You better watch it I am a cop the stars could link you to this you know."
As he's Leaving the Man2 says:"oh by the way I sed maybe sooner."
Jason smirks and begins to go back to his office.
Once back in his office john tells Jason that the men have not reported in yet
Jason:"ok I'm going to go john I put you in charge of this."
John shocked says:"what about my men? "
Jason responds:"dont worry."
John:"oook sir when do you want the report on this?"
jason:"don't worry I'll see you around and then get it. OK?"
Jason then leaves the room and then leaves the site taking all 3 choppers with him leaving one truck to get the men out. A short time later John wonders about Jason but is interrupted by his men report. the first team has not reported in yet. He then sends in the other team butt as he's about to give the order he heres from the other team.
Team member :"their coming their coming close the hive close it!"
they all here the train coming down the track.
One man says:"the train is coming to fast it will DE rail."
John then looks thru his binoculars and sees the train butt what he sees scars him right to his soul.John finely able to say something screams:" oh **** men fall back ."
man2:"sir what's wrong?"
John hands the man his binoculars and says "look!"then runs up the stairs.
Man2 looks thru them and cant believe what he is seeing.
man3:"sir what is it?"
man2:"god help us."
the train then comes flying off the track coming in side ways killing 12men but if that is not bad enough the man3 knows now what was wrong with john and man 2.
the train was filled with zombies and hunters,chimeras,hounds,a
nd every thing else he could not believe he was seeing.
8 men get out of the hive john man2,3 , and 6 others get out to the mansion about 45 zombies,the dogs ,the chimeras, spiders, and snakes get out before man3 closes the door and is killed.
John sitting in front of a switch bored who has been up stars for 5 minutes or so yells :"kit help me do this ."kit(man2)yells back:"screw that lets get the hell out of here."
John screams:"no this will close the mansion if they get out were all fu**ed."
Kit agrees and then helps john begin the sequence to close mansion but john soon tells kit to run he has it kit does not want to leave but does so any ways as he runs fore the 1st dinning room he turns in time to see john get killed by zombies.
Kit then runs throw the mansion with the zombies following him they are to slow to ketch him but have gotten all over to mansion but luckily the sequence worked the mansions main floor started to shift a new stair case went in front of the one Alice and Matt where in at the end of the first. so now to the left and right is right are doors and the main hallway is now blocked off by the new stair case and the Ed dining room is sealed of from the rest of the mansion along with the hive (The hall way the umbrella guys where in at the end of the first when they took Matt out was in the middle the main hallway from the game it was taken down when Alice and Matt where taken out.)
the windows (the ones the mercenaries went threw in the first movie) took to longer to close a few zombies and dogs got out and will spread making more zombies and more dogs.
Their is now no way to get to the 2nd dining room ,the hallway, or the hive.
The hunters are stuck behind the main stair case.
The chimeras found the guard houses and stayed thair,the snakes went to the pool,and the spiders have gone all over the mansion and the guard house.
the mansion has locked all doors but one one in the front someone must have opened it maybe to get out.(kit)





3 weeks later,
a man is talking on an inter com: "Julia get a hold of all of the stars members tell them we have a mission"
Julia responds:"yes mr.Wesker."she the picks up rthe phone and begins to call the team.
Ringringrin.. Jill picks up the phone and says "hello?".
julia:"jill caption wesker has asked me to call all of the stars team.He wants you all to come down to the station"
jill:"yha problee just another exercise nothing ever happens in this town."
Julie :"uh Jill he's sending in bravo team in 40 minuets Edward to."
Jill:"ed to...OK tell him ill be there in 10 minuets"
Julie and Jill hang up.
Julie on the answering machine:"Chris Chris its your machine wake up! Chris hello?"chris answers the phone "Julie I hate it when you do that."
julie:"sorry did not mean to wake you at the butt crack of 7:40pm but Wesker wants the team in know.its not an exercise"
Chris drops the phone and leaves.
8:15pm
wesker:"ok weave waited for Chris long enough so heres y you are all here as you all know their have been a bizarre rash of murders near the woods on the outskirts of Ratcoon City. Now we think its a group of about ten men butgets cut off by Edward :"wesker I was enjoying a nice suspension and you call us in for news weave known fore weeks?".
"Their is a new development Ed ,"wesker says.
Wesker:"we have found out that their are several places in the woods they could hide(the 10 men) we have arranged fore bravo team to take a train that will circle the forest and stop near a mansion it could be the hide out. Bravo team will go in first.
Enrico:"ok when?"
wesker:"now "
enrico:" yes sir OK men suit up Ed,Kevin fire up the chopper."
Mean wile a few doors down Chris is getting something out of a vending machine.
Bravo team then passes by forest stops and says: "hi air force."chris responds:"hi redneck."
"what's going on "Chris asks?
Forest replies:"you know those murders that have been happing?"chris"yes forest ."
Forest:"well any ways we have a lead bravo team is going in. oh by the way look."he the points at Rebecca a new bravo team member and says:"shes only 18 you think Iv got a shot?"
Chris responds sharpley:"shes my sisters age OK and no not a chance in hell."
Forest:"sorry.I'v got to go now man bye."
Chris:"bye".
Ten minutes later Chris finally shows up and says:"sorry I'm late guys."
Wesker:"chris I know you live further away then anyone else butt put on your Syrin on next time and speed. Jill, berry brief Chris I'll see you at 19:00 hours. frost come with me I need to talk to you."



part two:

In the hall way out side the stars office wesker is talking to Joseph.
Wesker: Joseph are you ready?
Joeshoph: of course. So do they have any idea whats going to happen?
Wesker: no.and we will keep it that way right?
Joseph: yes sir.
Wesker: go back in their make it seem like nothings wrong.
Joe the goes back in to the s.t.a.r.s office.
Wesker: and you don't ether.
Cut Sean: the bravo team chopper is about to take off.
Enrico: OK menand women are you ready?
All: yes sir.
Enrico: good Kevin, Edward let's go.
Eward: OK rookie do you know what your doing? He askes sarcasticley.
Kevin: yes sir I know.
Edward: well let's go then.
Rebecca talking to Richard: what is wrong with Ed?
Richard: he's the chiefs nephew, he's been trying to get kicked out of stars for going on two years.
Rebecca: why?
Richard: he just does he doesn't like doing it and his uncle wont let him quit.
Rebecca: well why does he talk to Kevin like that?
Richard: if your disrespectful to an officer you can be kicked out.
Rebecca: yha but since I've joined you and Kevin are the only ones who have been nice to me.
Richard laughing: you have got a lot to learn little girl.
Rebecca just sits their and looks out the window.
Bang..bang.bang.the copper starts spinning out of control
"What's wrong?" enrico asks.
Edward: the engines dying! Kevin help me drive. this is going to hurt.
The chopper stops spinning out of control long enough for Ed and Kevin to make a hard landing Kevin and Edward manage to set it down with minimal injuries.
Enrico: OK everyone are you OK
Kenneth: yes.
Forest: yes
The rest: yes
Enrico: OK survey the area and keep your guns drawn were looking for crazy people.
Rebecca wonders off towards a train stopped near by.
She tells enrico and he tells her and Edward to "get on the train and investigate ."
Rebecca: I thout we where all going to get on it?
Enrico: we where but look at this.
It's an mp truck on its side two men lie dead next to it.
Enrico hands Rebecca and Edward a clip bored with a prisoner transport info on it.
Enrico: we think he is still around here so were are going to look. You two are to take the train around the woods and look for seines that people are staying their in the places on the map. OK?
Rebecca and Edward: yes sir.
Rebecca and Edward leave to go on the train.
Enrico: OK men the man we are looking for is a killer he's killed as many as twenty-three men.
Crack.silence..crack.al
l of the stars members draw their guns and point them to some trees that the sound came from.
Ten dogs come out from the bushes, the men are relieved for a minute till they realize the dogs have no skin. they all have a fear not thought possible be for but before the men can reacted the dogs lunge at them they all dogged them but Kevin gets bit by the dog he then runs from them and all of the dogs chase him.
Enrico shoots the dogs as they run after Kevin.
Fore stop, turn around and start to chase the other stars members.
Enrico:run!!!
Kenneth: what about Kevin?
Forest: he's dead!
They all keep running wondering how long they can keep going.
Cut Sean: Kevin finally runs in to the chopper closing the door behind him.
He gets on the radio and call's the base: hello this is stars bravo teamrepeat this is stars bravo teamdam it anyone help us!!!
"Crash" the door fly's opened and Kevin's screams can be heard as the camera comes in for a close up on the mansion.
Back the station Joseph heres Kevin on the radio.
Joseph: well it happened when are we going in?
Wesker: I'll give them a daythen we go in.
Close up on weskers face then fade to black

When the screen comes back the date shows up followed by the time.



July, 24.1998

5:00 PM

Chris and Jill are at Jill's house.
Chris: come on Jill you know you want it!
Jill: no I don't never again Chris!
Chris: to bad because I'm going to give it to!
Jill's face turns to pure terror as she hears him say it she then brasses her self and then he does ithe sprays her with the hoes.
Jill: I worded you now your going to get!
Chris: like hell!*chris then runs from the now socked Jill. *
Jill tackles Chris and they laid on the floor together and lock eyes and just as they got closer and were about to kiss the phone rang.
Jill: well athat is probley wesker it's probley time.
Chris: yah*they both get up and Jill answers the phone.
*chris walks out side while Jill on the phone and he sees the nabber and dissides to say "hi."
Nabber: hi Chris how are you and Jill?
Chris: were OK how have you been?
Nabber: well I'm OK I guess.
Chris: how's Julie holding up?
Nabber: she's doing better she still misses them.
Nabber: so I hear stars are going in to the woods to find throws...people?
Chris: we are sir bravo team is already there well get them sir your kids willwill.
Nabber: I know you'll get them.
Chris: yes well get them dead or alive.
Nabber: at least we will have that.
Chris: have a good day Sam, bye.
Sam(nabore): I will and Chris get them for us.
Chris: we will.*chris then walks to his truck and waits for Jill.*
Jill on the phone: OK Julie me and Chris are on are way.
Julie: buh-bye.
Jill hangs up the phone and begins to leave her house when she notices the picture of her dad on the shelf by the door.
Jill look's at the picture for a minute and then remembers to grab her lock pick.
As she grabs the lock PIC she looks at a parole paper with the name victor valentine on it.
Jill thinks to her self: dad why did you do it.
Chris back at the car begins to look throw her mail (the mail box was by his car).
He soon finds a letter from someone named vic.
He try's not to read it but cant help him self so being very jealous he begins to read the letter.
Chris reading till Jill comes out and smacks him
Jill: I told you Chris don't read my mail. What the hell is wrong with you?
Chris:sorrysorry,its just I'mI mean I don't know any thing about you jill you joined stars two years ago and I know nothing of your past I know your dad is in jail and that you had run ins with cop's when you where young but that is it.
Jill: I don't know much about your ether.
Chris: OK here it goeswhen I turned 18 I joined the air force I was kicked out two years later.
Chris: I became a drifter till I meant berry and he was able to get me on the stars team now you.
Jill: let's go were going to be late.
Chris: OK maybe later?
Jill: maybe.
*Chris smiles the gets in the car and they begin driving away. *



When the screen comes back the date shows up followed by the time.



July, 24,1998

5:00 PM

Chris and Jill are at Jill's house.
Chris: come on Jill you know you want it!
Jill: no I don't never again Chris!
Chris: to bad because I'm going to give it to!
Jill's face turns to pure terror as she hears him say it she then brasses her self and then he does ithe sprays her with the hoes.
Jill: I wondered you now your going to get!
Chris: like hell!*chris then runs from the now socked Jill. *
Jill tackles Chris and they laid on the floor together and lock eyes and just as they got closer and where about to kiss the phone rang.
Jill: well athat is probley wesker it's probley time.
Chris: yah*they both get up and Jill answers the phone.
*chris walks out side while Jill on the phone and he sees the nabber and disides to say "hi."
Nabber: hi Chris how are you and Jill?
Chris: were OK how have you been?
Nabore:well I'm OK I guess.
Chris: how's Julie holding up?
Nabore: shes doing better she still misses them.
Nabore:so I hear stars are going in to the woods to find thows...people?
Chris: we are sir bravo team is already there well get them sir your kids willwill.
Nabore:I know you'll get them.
Chris: yes well get them dead or alive.
Nabore:at least we will have that.
Chris: have a good day Sam, bye.
Sam(nabore):I will and Chris get them for us.
Chris: we will.*chris then walks to his truck and waits for Jill. *
Jill on the phone: OK Julie me and Chris are on are way.
Julie: buh-bye.
Jill hangs up the phone and begins to leave her house when she notices the picture of her dad on the shelf by the door.
Jill look's at the picture for a minute and then remembers to grab her lock pick.
As she grabs the lock PIC she looks at a parole paper with the name victor valentine on it.
Jill thinks to her self: dad why did you do it.
Chris back at the car begins to look throw her mail (the mail box was by his car).
He soon finds a letter from someone named vic.
He try's not to read it but cant help him self so being very jealous he begins to read the letter.
Chris reading till Jill comes out and smacks him
Jill: I told you Chris don't read my mail. What the hell is wrong with you?
Chris:sorrysorry,its just I'mI mean I don't know any thing about you Jill you joined stars two years ago and I know nothing of your past I know your dad is in jail and that you had run ins with cop's when you where young but that is it.
Jill: I don't know much about your ether.
Chris: OK here it goeswhen I turned 18 I joined the air force I was kicked out two years later.
Chris: I became a drifter till I meant berry and he was able to get me on the stars team now you.
Jill: let's go were going to be late.
Chris: OK maybe later?
Jill: maybe.
*Chris smiles the gets in the car and they begin driving away.*

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more to come soon

like now
5:41 p.m
you see Rebecca running towards the mansion, dogs chasing her, at the door of the mansion you can see enrico, forest, and Richard firing at the dogs and you see Kenneth running towards Rebecca to try and help her.
Kennth: come on Rebecca!
Rebecca begins to run faster tords the house when three more dogs lunge at her and...

6:30 p. m
Chris and Jill walk in to the stars office.
Wesker walking by: Chris Jill where the hell have you been, weave been waiting for hours?
Jill: we where held up sorry.
Chris: what's going on and why are we suiting up?
Wesker as he puts on his vest and says: we lost contact with bravo team this after noon.
Jill and Chris are silent and just put on there gear.

Chief irons walks in the office.
Wesker: chief irons?
Iorns:hi everyone, are you almost ready?
Wesker: yes we are, where leaving in a twenty minutes.
Iorns k.I just wanted to wish you all good luck, so good luck bye.
Iorns then leaves the room.
Chris, Jill and wesker are all puzzled by irons but continue to get ready.
Barry: Jill, Chris what the hell was that all about?
Jill: I have no idea.
Chris: yha hes never wished us luck before.
Barry: well keep your eyes opened this mission may be more then we think it is.
Chris: aybe it has to do with my friend,befor he vaneshed he sed something about the police being corrupt and something about umbrella.
Barry: Chris no your friend he's just missing it's not related I'm sorry.
Chris: no itJill grabs Chris's hand and he stops talking.
Jill whispers to Chris: relax Chris you need to just focus on the mission. If there is anything well find it and him.

Across the room Joseph is talking to wesker.

Joseph: so what the hell was that?
Wesker: just keeping us on our toes I guess. (He smirks)
Joseph: so what do you have planed for them?
Wesker: You'll find out.
Joseph: oh come on tell me I can't wait the suspense is killing them. (Causally points at the stars)
Wesker: funny but you'll have to wait patsie.
Joseph: patsie?
Wesker: didn't you know I'm framing you. (Wesker stares at Joe with an emotionless face)
Joseph: what the hell are you talking about?
Wesker then starts laughing and says: your so gullible
Wesker talking to the rest of the stars members: OK everyone where going to the hella pad.
Chris: the hell pad?
Wesker: yes do you have a problem with that?
Chris: well yes!
Wesker: why?
Chris: the woods where bravo is is an hour drive away.
Jill: Chris stop.
Chris: no, I mean why do we have to use the helicopter, why not the hummers?
Wesker: irons want's us to use them, if we don't they will be taken away.
Brad: on the intercom it's a government thing, I'm ready when you guys are.
Wesker: well let's go guy's unless you have anymore questions Chris.
Chris: no I'm good.
Wesker: well guy's and girl it's time to go.
Barry: what about the new guy Dave, don, du DJ what ever his name is?
Wesker: he's late and we can't wait.
Chris: dam now I have composition.
They all laugh's minus wesker and head for the hellapad.
As there walking up some stairs Chris talks "I'm going to die"he says.
Wesker: oh thank God.
Jill: why do you say that Chris? \
Chris: the hellapad is to far a way.
Barry: Chris! I'm 38 and over weight and I'm fine.
Chris: yha but you have three kids your use to running.
Barry: true but the fact's still stand, your 25 and I'm 35.
Jill: 35? didn't you just say you where 38?
Wesker: whoa stop stealing my age Barry I'm 35 and your 38.
Barry: oh no you're my age I know it.
Wesker: yha 35.
Barry: exactly!
They stop to open the door to the hella pad.
When they all get to it they see brad standing there.
Frost: hi chickenheart.
Brad: hey ass.
Brad look's at Chris and begins talking to him: God will he ever drop that?
Brad: I mean you run and hide once and all of the sudden your chicken.
Brad: I mean they had big guns.
Jill: it was a training exercise and they where paint ball guns.
Brad: so.
Chris: sorry you're a chicken for ever.
Brad gets in the chopper angrily and starts to check the ensnarements.
They all get in to the chopper and it takes off.
Wesker talking to the team: are you all ready?
Alpha team: yes!

The helicopter sets down about 10 yards from bravo teams chopper and they all get out and head for the copper.
When they get to it it's recked and the door is broken.
Joseph approaches the chopper gets the door opened and sees Kevin's body with one eye and a dead dog lying next to him but the dog looks like it was skinned.
All of the images hit Joseph at once and he screams.
Jill and Chris come running up and see it.
Chris: what the hell happened to them?
Joseph: I don't know.
Chris: let's close the door.
Jill, and Joseph: OK
Joseph on the walkie talkie: wesker we found Kevin.
Joseph: no sir he's dead but that's not all there'swell a skinned dog with him and Kevin's torn up.
Joseph: no sir not shot torn up.
Cut Sean
Brad is sitting in the chopper listening to Joseph and weskers conversation and begins to start the engines just in case.
Back to Joseph
They begin to walk around searching for signs of any one and that's when Joseph finds a gun as he is picking it up it dawns on him that its attached to a hand.
He all most screams but sees a huge mass running at him from the darkness and before he can raise his shot gun the mass lunges at his throat and with a swift blow Joseph hits the ground as he does three more of the things that now look like dogs come and they start ripping him apart as they are he manages to get his gun and start shooting but it was to late he was done for.
Chris hears the shots and runs toward them and sees Jill standing there watching the dogs killing Joseph.
Jill shocked by the hole thing finally snaps out of it in time to see one of the dogs look up at her and begin to run towards her.
Jill raises her gun just as the dog jumps towards her but befor she can fire she hears a gun shot and the dog goes down then Chris runs next to her and says "we have to get to that mansion be for they kill us and with that they both begin running in the direction of the house.
As they are running a dog begins to chase them and Chris realizing they cant out run them turns around to shoot but does not have a chance because as he does Barry comes from no where and shoots the dog.
Barry: let's go!
They all resume running and start firing at the dogs that are now behind them.
Hey soon hear a noise and look up ahead and see the chopper taking off.
Chris: brad what hell are you doing. *chris screams. *
The chopper takes off leaving the rest of the alpha team on the ground.
They all continue running towards the house.
As they are running wesker shows up in front of them running too.
Chris: where the hell is brad going?
Wesker: whatbrad left?
Chris: yes! Where the hell did he go?
Barry: the chicken lives up to his title.
Just as they get to the house Chris falls but Barry PICS him up and they all are out side the door but there is one problem, it's locked!
Chris: what the hell do you mean it's locked?
Jill: it's locked.
Barry: not for long. *barry then amies his 357. Colt python at the door and pulls the trigger but he's out of bullets.
Barry: ****!
Jill: I have a lock pick you guy's hold the dogs off.
Chris: way ahead of you.
Chris and wesker start shooting the dog's as Jill try's to PIC the lock.
Chris: any luck!
Jill: I almost have it!
Barry finally finds the ammo in his butt pack and a samarie edge hand gun.
Barry: let me try again
he points his gun at the door again and fire's but the door has reinforced steal beneath the wood of the door and it does nothing but sends wood chards flying.
Barry: dam it!
Jill: I got it.
Wesker: what?
Jill: there's a trigger to open the door, the locks a decoy.
Chris: press it!
Jill presses the button she found and the door opens.
Everyone rushes in but Chris because he's still shooting the dogs so they don't get in to the house.
Chris is about to run in the house when suddenly a dog comes running at him from the left it then
jumps at his hand and takes his gun out of his it, as he's about to grab it back Barry pulls him in to the house and closes the door.
Chris, Jill, Barry and wesker are in the front room of the mansion to there front is a grand stair case that goes up to a door and then goes left and right to the next floor.
The sealing are like 20 feet high and there are two doors to the right and one to the left.
After they catch there breath and look at there surroundings they begin to talk.
Wesker: is everyone OK?
Chris: yes.
Barry: yes.
Jill: yes
Wesker: good, how much ammo do we have?
Barry: I have 12 bullets for my magnum plus 5 in the chambers and 6 clips for the berettas.
Jill: I have three clips.
Wesker: Chris?
Chris: I have two clips but no gun.
Barry: here. *he hands Chris his samurai edge (a custom beretta) hand gun. *
Chris: thanks.
*sudenley they hear three gun shots but before they can say anything Chris and berry bulleted fore the set of double doors to there left and run throo them.
Jill and wesker soon run after them.
As they are all running they look at the room there in.
It was a dinning room with a big table in the middle of the room and a landing all around the room above them.
Jill and wesker see Barry and Chris run throo a door at the end of the room so they follow them.
Wesker and Jill get to the door and go in to find it's a dank hall way.
They look to the left and see Barry and Chris just standing there looking at something around the corner.
So Jill and wesker just go over to them and see what's so important that there looking at 
When they get there they are shocket and cant turn away they all now just stare and that's when it hears them.
They all look in horror as this man is hunched over Kenneth's body eating it.
As it is it hears them and turns around to reveal there it's eyes are wight, it's lips are missing leaving it's teeth and gum exposed plus it has a chunk of flesh missing on it's head.
As it turns and look's at them it has a piece of flesh in it's mouth from Kenneth.
Jill: oh my god. *she says without a drop of emotion. *
Wesker: shoot it!
All of the stars start to shoot the weird man and he hits the ground dead.
Chris: what the hell was wrong with that guy?
Barry: I don't know.
Wesker: get the tape out of Kenneth's camera Chris, we have to know what happened to him.
Chris leans over to Kenneth's body and grabs the tape and as he does Kenneth begins to get up but his eyes are like the other guys where and his intestines are hanging out and his neck has had all of the skin stripped off of it.
Chris backs up as are the other guy's (and Jill) .
All of the other stars members are speechless and as they back up to the door the guy they shot gets up too.
Jill: what the **** is going on?
Chris: back in to the dinning room.
Barry: yha.
They all get back in to the dinning room and lock the door to the hall way.
Barry: they where they where
Chris: zombies!
Wesker and Jill: oh God.
Barry: how can that be.
Chris:the roomers  the skinless dogs the murders there all true the commandos all of it.
Wesker: zombiesChris did you get the tape?
Chris: yes.
Jill: I have Joseph's tape he threw it when the dogs where killing him.
Wesker: OK the mission still stands we have to find bravo team and we should find something that will play Kenneth's tape.
Wesker: so Barry your with me Chris and Jill you to are to gather.
Barry: OK.
Jill: OK.
Chris: yha.
Wesker: OK Chris Jill go back to the main hall and see if any of thows doors are unlocked, if they are search for survivors but if any more of thows thing show up leave the room and try the next door.
Wesker: Barry and I will stay here to find out what to do about Kenneth and his friend.

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Its GORYLICIOUS!!!


"I laugh in the face of danger...then I hide until it goes away."

"Friends come and go. Enemies accumulate."

"The best way to get ahead is to use the one you got."
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Its GORYLICIOUS!!!

thanks i think.

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coolmig012000 said:

Its GORYLICIOUS!!!

thanks i think.


Its a compliment. Silly 85...


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1985invt said:

coolmig012000 said:

Its GORYLICIOUS!!!

thanks i think.


Its a compliment. Silly 85...

ok, so does that mean you liked it or just the gore?

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IT(THE STORY) WILL COME A LOT FASTER NOW SINCE IT'S KINDA SCRIPTED BY THE GAME'S AND SOME WILL BE THE SAME BUT TO KEEP IN LINE WITH THE MOVIE THINGS WILL HAPPEN THAT DID NOT HAPPEN IN THE GAMES AND THINGS WILL HAPPEN A LITTLE DIFFRENTLY THE THEY DID IN THE GAME.
JUST FYI.
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coolmig012000 said:

1985invt said:

coolmig012000 said:

Its GORYLICIOUS!!!

thanks i think.


Its a compliment. Silly 85...

ok, so does that mean you liked it or just the gore?


Is in it obvious? If i liked the gore, changes are I liked the story.


"I laugh in the face of danger...then I hide until it goes away."

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1985invt said:

coolmig012000 said:

1985invt said:

coolmig012000 said:

Its GORYLICIOUS!!!

thanks i think.


Its a compliment. Silly 85...

ok, so does that mean you liked it or just the gore?


Is in it obvious? If i liked the gore, changes are I liked the story.

well then thank you cool.
anyone else read this?



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more to come soon.


more will come soon plus a rewrite


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the_new_invt said:

more to come soon.


more will come soon plus a rewrite
wheres buff?


*doughnuts are my antidrug*
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the_new_invt said:

the_new_invt said:

more to come soon.


more will come soon plus a rewrite
wheres buff?
No Clue.


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marlon0626 said:

the_new_invt said:

the_new_invt said:

more to come soon.


more will come soon plus a rewrite
wheres buff?
No Clue.

Well I'm back some what and am prolly gonna continue this story, maybe another rewrite(Gota reread it to see first.
any of the old people here?


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