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Enjoy this script
MEDLUM:
ALIEN Vs. PREDATOR Vs. TERMINATOR Vs. ROBOCOP

Part 1. The Arrivals


1. EXT. DETROIT NIGHT

Thundering footsteps can be heard. C.U of can of coke as a huge metalic foot crushes it. Pan up to reveal ROBOCOP on night patrol. ROBOCOP gets to the end of the street and turns the corner and pulls his gun out.

ROBOCOP
Freeze punks!

ROBOCOP looks left and right at the empty alley.

ROBOCOP
I never seem to catch any bad guys any more, has crime dropped or is it the fact that I move at a pase of 6 miles an hour and can be heard walking from half a mile away?


CUT TO:


2. EXT. OUTSIDE SHOP NIGHT

Buch of punks watch TV's in a shop window.

TV
This is Media-Break give us three minutes and we'll give you the world.

Casey Wong On TV.
Hi I'm Casey Wong todays top story in London, England. Scotland Yard prepares to launch their new cybernetic police officer ROBOBOBBY it's speicel features include saying OY! YOUR NICKED SUNSHINE! and it has a inbuilt leg holster that houses the latest in brittish police weaponry a really big batton! wow!

PUNK #1
Boy I wouldn't want to be living in England right now.

The TV's start to flicker.

PUNK #2
What the hell?


CUT TO:


3. EXT. ALLEY NIGHT

Lightning bolts start to appear they run up the walls of the alley. They form a ball of light, inside the ball the TERMINATOR appears neiling.



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4. EXT. OUTSIDE SHOP NIGHT

The naked TERMINATOR appears from the corner. The punks stare as the TERMINATOR walks over to them.

PUNK #1
Having a little stroll.

TERMINATOR.
Having a liddle stroll (coldly)

PUNK #1
Cold tonight aint it!

The rest of the punks start to laugh, TERMINATOR looks down at his croch and then slowly looks up.

TERMINATOR.
Very funny.

TERMINATOR punches PUNK #1 in the face he drops to the floor shaking PUNK#2 runs for the TERMINATOR. TERMINATOR grabs him by the throat.

TERMINATOR.
Ever wanded to get into TV...........Here's your big break!

TERMINATOR throws PUNK#2 at the shop window, he smashes threw it into a TV. The rest of the punks run TERMINATOR grabs PUNK#3 who is wearing a cool leather jacket and trousers.

TERMINATOR.
Take off your clothes.

PUNK#3
No, wait man if you're into that kind of thing I know this little place round the corner.

TERMINATOR.
Nauw!



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5. INT. POLICE H.Q NIGHT

ROBOCOP walks in the door.

POLICE CHIEF
Shoot any bad guys today Murph?

ROBOCOP.
No chief, I'm going to my little room.




6. INT. ROBOCOP'S LITTLE ROOM NIGHT

ROBOCOP sits down in. The whole room stars to shake as something crashes into the building. ROBOCOP rushes as fast as he can to see what it is.




7. INT. POLICE MAIN HALL NIGHT.

15 minutes later ROBOCOP arrives at the front of the police station to find a huge space craft that has crashed into threw the wall.


ROBOCOP.
Chief are you OK?

POLICE OFFICER BILL PAXTON
Yea Murph it happend 15 minutes ago.

POLICE CHIEF.
Shut up Paxton!


The Space ships doors begin to open, smoke poors out the door fogging the room slightly a tall figure appears in the dark...............






TO BE CONTINUED...............



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LMAO!!!!! Police Officer Bill Paxton? hahahaha, now that's funny. By the way, how many pages will you make this?







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LMAO!!!!! Police Officer Bill Paxton? hahahaha, now that's funny. By the way, how many pages will you make this?
a good few the stories running much faster into my head because of it's spoofines another page by tommorow I garentea





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cool. You gonna make like 25-30 pages long, like how Comic Critic makes his scripts? just wondering







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Couldn't resist putting another part on before I go to bed.

MEDLUM:
A.V.P.V.T.V.R


Part 2. The B*tch is Back......


8. INT. POLICE STATION NIGHT.

The tall figure walks from the craft.


POLICE OFFICER BILL PAXTON.
Oh my god it's an alien!

The figure emerges from the shaddows, It's a woman Ellen Ripley. She is bleeding from the crash she stumbles down the spaceships steps. ROBOCOP walks over to her and lifts her to her feat.


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You can't park that here.

RIPLEY's blood trickles onto ROBOCOP's hand, smoke starts to come from it. ROBOCOP pulls his hand from RIPLEY's he looks at his damadged finger the wires show.

ROBOCOP
What the hell are you?

RIPLEY
What the hell are you?

She collapses onto the floor. ROBOCOP carries her to the bench.




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9. EXT. SIDE WALK NIGHT

C.U of side walk two black boots appear pan up to reveal TERMINATOR in his cool new outfit. Pan to the left to reveal bus stop sign. TERMINATORS head turns quickly and looks off into the road. A bus stops infront of him the doors open. The TERMINATOR stares blankly at the driver.

DRIVER
Hello buddy do you whant on?

TERMINATOR
I need dis vehicle

DRIVER
Then get on

TERMINATOR just stands there

DRIVER
Fine

The DRIVER closes the bus doors. The TERMINATOR walks round the front of the bus and rips the driver's side door off. The driver grabs a hand gun from under his seat (public transport these days) TERMINATOR grabs it in one quick move.

TERMINATOR
Dankyou

TERMINATOR grabs the driver by his collar and hurls him from the bus. TERMINATOR gets into the drivers seat and pushes the handbrake off. TERMINATOR's head slowly turns round to the bewilderd passangers on the bus. He pushes a button, the bus doors open.

TERMINATOR
Get out



10. EXT. BUS STOP NIGHT

The six passengers stand as the bus revs off into the distance.



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11. INT. POLICE STATION MORNING

RIPLEY's eyes open 3 cops are standing by her.

RIPLEY
Hudson?

OFFICER BILL PAXTON
What?

RIPLEY
Are you Hudson I thought you died?

OFFICER BILL PAXTON
Oh, this chicks flipped man

RIPLEY grabs PAXTON's throat

RIPLEY
Don't call me chick!

RIPLEY lets him go.

COP#1
I think Paxton just crapped himself

COP#1 and COP#2 start laughing

OFFICER BILL PAXTON
That wasn't funny man

RIPLEY
Where am I?

COP#2
Your in detroit police department

COP#1
What happend?

RIPLEY
Well we, we were entering earths atmosphere and.......... suddenly we were attacked by another ship.

COP#1
Another ship?

RIPLEY
Yea, and .................... Oh my god

RIPLEY runs up into the space ship. She looks down part of the ship has ripped right through the floor.




12. INT. SPACE SHIP

There's a huge hole in the ship's wall where something has broken through RIPLEY can see right into the sewer.

RIPLEY
Oh no it's gone

COP#2
What

RIPLEY
The Queen she got onto the ship!

OFFICER BILL PAXTON
Royalty!

PAXTON spits into his hand and wipes his hair back. ROBOCOP enters the ship.

RIPLEY
No, an Alien and if it get's loose it could breed.

RIPLEY walks further into the ship. She looks at the dead, they all have chest woulds where something has burst out (chest bursters).

RIPLEY
Their's more of them, One for every dead person on this ship

COP#2
What happend?

RIPLEY
I, I don't remeber exactly but those scientists who created me created two batches of aliens the first mutated, The first Queen gave birth to a half human, half alien thing that got sucked into outerspace.

ROBOCOP
And the second?

RIPLEY
We didn't know about that till we were on the ship the 2nd batch was pure, no human side effects and thats whats in those sewers right now.

ROBOCOP
Then we'll have to find it.

PAXTON leans down to CALL's body.

OFFICER PAXTON.
God what happend to her?

RIPLEY
She's a droid, a robot

OFFICER PAXTON
Hay, Murph think we found a date for ya!

Suddenly we see the hole thing in preddy vision as PAXTON laughs.



To be continued..........





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LOL this stories GREAT




I met him 15 years ago, I was told their was nothing left, no reason, no concionce, no understanding. I met this 6 year old child with this blank pale emotionless face and the blackest eyes..the devilseyes.
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I think it was funny that Officer Bill Paxton s**t his pants, hahahaha .


By the way Cybopath, what year does your script take place in?







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The year, well this will not hold up to close scruteny but it's set 3 or 4 years after ROBOCOP 3, Ripley has just come from the end of ALIEN 4.





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Cybopath said:

The year, well this will not hold up to close scruteny but it's set 3 or 4 years after ROBOCOP 3, Ripley has just come from the end of ALIEN 4.



but if this script takes place 4 years after the events from "Robocop 3" and she just came back from the end of "Alien 4" (which takes place 200 years after "Alien 3"), did her ship time-travel into the past or something after it was attacked?







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you guys should go comic book shopping :P seriously their are lots of diffrent something vs something elses, iv got batman vs pred, alien vs superman, avp, robocop vr terminator, and accuple others that i can't remember on hand, their put away so i don't wana look. p.s DHC RULES!!!

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fx3_vegetto said:

you guys should go comic book shopping :P seriously their are lots of diffrent something vs something elses, iv got batman vs pred, alien vs superman, avp, robocop vr terminator, and accuple others that i can't remember on hand, their put away so i don't wana look. p.s DHC RULES!!!

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I sent Dark Horse Comics an e-mail, about my idea about a "Batman vs. Terminator" comic book series (based on the same thread I've created), but they sent a message back, saying that can't use the Terminator's name anymore.







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metalman said:

fx3_vegetto said:

you guys should go comic book shopping :P seriously their are lots of diffrent something vs something elses, iv got batman vs pred, alien vs superman, avp, robocop vr terminator, and accuple others that i can't remember on hand, their put away so i don't wana look. p.s DHC RULES!!!

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I sent Dark Horse Comics an e-mail, about my idea about a "Batman vs. Terminator" comic book series (based on the same thread I've created), but they sent a message back, saying that can't use the Terminator's name anymore.
I know the TERMINATOR rghts are all over the place

T1. Orion, MGN, Virgin

T2. Tristar,Canal, Lightstorm, Carloco, Momentum, Universal

T3. Warner bros, Columbia, Tristar, C2, IMF, Intermedia

thats y T3 took so long 2 be made

Oh the Time line I know Aien 4 is years in the future but i suppose a timestream could account for her ship in Robo's world but this script isn't that seriose





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awesome. But I thought it'll be cooler if Ripley said something about her ship time-traveling back in the past into our time, when you put up the next part of your script.







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Yea time travel will play a part in this especielly for the sequal MEDLUM II:
I don't wan't togive too uch away but their will be more Vs in that from Sci-Fi, Action and HORROR icons





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ok people, GET REAL!! they are probably not going to make a movie like that.
cmon, some people would struggle with the paragraph long title!
Just imagine that you are in a theater and it has a preview for it, then it says all this stuff just for the title, i think it would really really suck and be stupid if they made a movie like this! It makes me sick even to hear someone saying that they might even make that movie!
U probably just mad up the script that u just wrote anyways!!

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that's the beauty of fan-made scripts, you can put it anyway you want.







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ok people, GET REAL!! they are probably not going to make a movie like that.
cmon, some people would struggle with the paragraph long title!
Just imagine that you are in a theater and it has a preview for it, then it says all this stuff just for the title, i think it would really really suck and be stupid if they made a movie like this! It makes me sick even to hear someone saying that they might even make that movie!
U probably just mad up the script that u just wrote anyways!!
Well this is not a seriose script I don't intend it to be a film the plots impossible. This is a spoofy script i you had botherd to read it you'd relise that





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Thanx guys for sticking up damb I hope alot of people are not bipasing my thread thinking it's another who would win topic Anyway here the next part enjoy

MEDLUM:
AvPvTvR

Part 3: The Warriors First Battle



13. INT. POLICE WEAPONS HOLD DAY

ROBOCOP stand with a huge atomatic rifile while RIPLEY, OFFICER PAXTON and the 2 cops get guns and ammo. PAXTON fills a bag, PAXTON picks up ROBOCOP's gun hand.

OFFICER PAXTON
Murph you whant me to take this?

ROBOCOP
Yes

RIPLEY.
Ok lets go

OFFICER PAXTON.
Aliens, they come in piece........

PAXTON cocks his twelve gage.

OFFICER PAXTON
They go in pieces!



14. INT. SPACE SHIP DAY

ROBOCOP, RIPLEY, PAXTON and the others prepare to go down the sewer. They hear a motor get louder.



15. INT. POLICE STATION DAY.

A bus crashes through the other wall it slides across the marbel floor hitting the POLICE CHIEF.


ROBOCOP.
NOOO!!!

The bus slambs through the protective pillers and skids to a halt. The 5 look at the celling as it shakes.


ROBOCOP.
It won't hold


The bus doors screech open. The TERMINATOR emerges from the dust, now wearing a pair of black shades and holding an M-16 with grenade launcher. TERMINATOR stands by the bus stareing at ROBOCOP.


TERMINATOR
Alex Murphy

ROBOCOP
Thats me

TERMINATOR
Kiss your big metal ass goodbye

OFFICER PAXTON
This guy doesn't know who he's f*cking with!

TERMINATOR fires the machine gun at ROBOCOP. The bullits scuf his protective chest. ROBOCOP fires back at the TERMINATOR. The bullits rickashe of the TERMINATOR.


OFFICER PAXTON
What the hell?


TERMINATOR cocks the grenade launcher and fires it a ROBOCOP it hits him in the chest he flies back into the space ship the rest run back inside to get him. Debris starts to fall from the ceiling the TERMINATOR marches forward to the ship.


ROBOCOP
This building is unsecure get into the sewer.


ROBOCOP gets up and walks to the spaceship door. TERMINATOR walks to the ship he aims the M-16 at ROBOCOP. In a blur the M -16 is in half TERMINATOR stares at the trigger mechanisim still in his hand. Infront of him stands a Blur, the PREDATOR cloacked. ROBOCOP stares at this thing. The PREDATOR uncloackes itself. The 7ft 6 PREDATOR towers over the 6ft 2 TERMINATOR. PREDATOR grabs the TERMINATOR, TERMINATOR grabs the PREDATOR back they struggle banging each other on desks. TERMINATOR picks PREDATOR up and rams it into a piller, the piller gives way huge pieces of derbris fall, a huge chunk falls on the space ship nocking ROBOCOP back and seperating him from the police station.



16. INT. SPACESHIP

ROBOCOP grabs PAXTON.

ROBOCOP
Lets go.

ROBOCOP, PAXTON, RIPLEY and the two cops decend into the sewer while the whole place shakes.



17. INT. POLICE STATION DAY

In the chaos of the crumbeling building the PREDATOR and TERMINATOR stand toe to toe. PREDATOR begins an array of right and left hooks to the TERMINATOR's face. The TERMINATOR slightly looses balance each time. The PREDATOR looks at its knuckles bright green blood is on them and also on The TERMINATOR's face which is also slightly bloody from the PREDATOR's punches. PREDATOR grabs TERMINATOR and struggles to lift him just enough to throw him over a desk. TERMINATOR falls backwards and lands on his back. PREDATOR runs up the wall and jumps onto the TERMINATOR's chest. The TERMINATOR staggers to his feat. the PREDATOR lands about 25 feet infront of TERMINATOR. TERMINATOR looks down quickly at his chest as 3 red dots forming a triangle appear. PREDATOR shoots a plasma blast at the TERMINATOR nocking him back, the ceiling now comes crashing down ontop of TERMINATOR, PREDATOR leaps threw the window.




18. EXT. POLICE STATION DAY

Broken glass lands on the sidewalk followed by PREDATOR's feet. PREDATOR watches as the whole building caves in on itself. PREDATOR turns its cloacking device back on.




19. EXT. STREET DAY.

Firetruck and ambulances fly past sirens wailing, Camera pans to the sidewalk. A boy about 10 bounces a ball on the street in rolls off onto the road and land in the grooves of a drain. The boy runs to it and neils down to get it. SCREEECH! The boys feet disappear down the drain ripping the bars out.



20. INT. SEWER

RIPLEY, PAXTON, COP#1 and COP#2 walk throw the sewer. Their guns have tourches attatched. ROBOCOP covers the rear.

OFFICER PAXTON
So ah, Ripley was that one of those aliens you were talking about back there?

RIPLEY
No, I've never seen anything like that before

OFFICER PAXTON
Great, I've seen some weird things today.....Hay Murph this almost makes you look normal.

ROBOCOP.
Yes quite

COP#2
So Ripley how tough are these things?

RIPLEY
They're fast, Deadly shoot for their heads its the most fragile part of them their bodies are incased in bone.

OFFICER PAXTON
Yea like zombies.

COP#2
So how many are their?

RIPLEY
Their were only 2 humans on the ship so they'll be 2 drones and the queen.

OFFICER PAXTON.
If one comes near me I'll ram this up it's ass.

PAXTON is brandishing a knife.

RIPLEY
I wouldn't advise that, they have acid for blood

OFFICER PAXTON
Great.

RIPLEY
They also are afraid of fire

ROBOCOP
Paxton

ROBOCOP starts to unscrew his left hand. PAXTON opens the bag and pulls out ROBO's gun hand. ROBOCOP throws his left hand at PAXTON and PAXTON throws the gun hand back. RIPLEY turns around as ROBOCOP snaps the hand into place.

RIPLEY
So whats that for?

ROBOCOP ingages the flame thrower sending a burst of fire across the sewer in the oppisite direction.

OFFICER PAXTON.
Yea Robo'll fry their asses.


21. EXT. POLICE STATION RUBBLE DAY

All the emergancey services are around the reuins of the police station. They find nothing but a few dead bodies. A paramedic spots a pair of sun glasses he picks them up and examins them. the rubble starts to move suddnly the TERMINATOR stands up jacket ripped slightly coverd in dust, their's a huge gash on his cheek showing the metal underneath.

TERMINATOR.
Dere mine

TERMINATOR grabs the sunglasses off the paramedic. TERMINATOR walks to the OCP police cars.

POLICE OFFICER#1
Hay you

TERMINATOR just keeps walking. POLICE OFFICER#1 stands in his way, TERMINATOR grabs him takes his shot gun and trows him at a police car. The other officers shout freeze and pull their guns out.

TERMINATOR
Don't f*ck with me!

The cops open fire on the TERMINATOR. TERMINATOR stars pumping the 12 gage into them he walks over to them picking up each dead cops gun. The rest of the cops flee. TERMINATOR gets into a cop car and screeches off.



TO BE CONTINUED................
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good story. but who or what made the boy disappear into the drain, feet first?







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OMFG, this is awsome. I think Cybopath and CC should team up and make a script or even a movie. That would be awsome.

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good story. but who or what made the boy disappear into the drain, feet first?
Sorry should have explained that a lil more clearly He when head first his feet dissapeard behind him it better describes the quickness of how he whent down.

I've put a pic for this script on my profile if you guys wanna look.
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Sweet Pic, but still you and CC should write a script together one of these days

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Cybo, when is part 4 going up?

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