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| Final Destination 4 Story |
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| POSTED Friday , August 25, 2006 05:50:02 PM |
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hey im kind of new to this and i love all the ideas that people have come up with for final destination 4. i have came up with a story cuz i was bored. so if you have the time... check it out and let me know what you think....thanks
It was career week at my school. But the principal wanted this career week to be different. So instead of the weird people coming to see us, we were going to be the weird ones and go to them.
For some odd reason I wasnt as excited to go on these field trips. My best friend Paul was trying to hype me up.
The first day arrives. The whole senior class was waiting in this large, cold room. Guys were throwing spitballs everywhere and the girls were just being girls with the make up and hair. Then Mr. Martinez steps in. Ok class. Settle down! The buses will be here in a while. So just sit and wait and I will let you guys know when the buses have arrived. In the corner of my eye I noticed some shadow. Whoa did you see that, Paul? I said. Dude what are you talking about? I didnt see nothing. I just shook my head. The window blew opened and the TV went on. It started flipping through different channels. It stopped on channel 36.
It started off a little fuzzy. It was the news. They were talking about the accident that happened on the roller coaster at McKinley Amusement Park. Wow dying on a roller coaster. Could you just imagine? said Kristin.
Ok class the buses are here! screamed Mr. Hernandez.
I sat with Paul but towards the window. The thought of dying on a roller coaster ran through my mind. Tom had his I-pod full blast. The bus went over a speed bump quickly causing his I-pod to fall.
Finally we got there. The first career was construction. Mr. Martinez handed me a camera and wanted me to take pictures. I took pictures of practically everything. I switched it to video and started recording. I was recording how tall the building was. I then noticed that was a crack on the building, but when I turned away the camera it wasnt there. I wanted to hurry up and go inside so I left the camera on the bus. I felt a gust of wind that gave me the chills. The building wasnt finished yet. We went to the top floor. The building was a circular building and from the top you could see the bottom. There was a tall white man who was talking about construction. I couldnt make out what he was saying because there was this power saw that was making an annoying sound. And I seemed to be the only one that noticed. Then it got even louder and thats when people started to notice. Some man went up to it and unplugged the machine but it still made noise. He got closer to the machine and it started to shake. It then exploded causing the blade to come out, cutting the mans head clear off. Blood was everywhere. He then fell landing on ladders, hitting other ladders like dominoes. That caused the building to shake. People started going to lower levels. Some man on the floor above us accidentally dropped a chainsaw and it landed on Patricia tearing her in half. Some material landed on a tractor causing its hook to swing. I turned and it started to go towards the teacher. Mr. Hernandez watch out! I screamed. When he turned the hook nailed him right in the neck. He was swinging back and fourth.
Tom was running with Rebecca by his side. The building started to fall apart and started to crack. Rebecca went back pushing Tom. He fell and his head landed on nails killing him instantly. Rebecca screamed and walked back hitting a ladder. The ladder fell causing a hammer to penetrate her neck.
Part of the wall fell apart causing it to crush the rest of the students. I was the only one left. The swinging hook with Mr. Martinez ran into me causing me to fall to the bottom floor. A pole stabbed my leg. I couldnt move it, and then I noticed the building started to shake. The building started to collapse and came down on me. AHHHHHHHHHHHH
It was like I was in a dream. I was still on the bus. My eyes were watery and I was sweating heavily. The bus went over the speed bump and Toms I-pod fell but I caught it on time. I got up and ran to Mr. Martinez. Mr. Garcia what is wrong with you? I grabbed the camera and went to video. It had what I recorded when we arrived. STOP THE BUS, STOP THE BUS. WE CANT GO TO THE BUILDING. I SAW THE SAW AND THE BUILDING. NO WE CANT GO! SOMETHINGS NOT RIGHT. SOMETHINGS NOT RIGHT. THE BUILDING IS GOING TO KILL US ALL. Everybody looked at me as if I was crazy.
The bus arrived. No you cant. The building is going to collapse. I blocked several kids from leaving the bus. The rest just went into the building. The rest of you stay in here. Ill do with you later! Mr. Martinez followed the rest of the kids into the building.
What the hell David? Why wont you let us in there? Asked Tom. I saw it, in my head. I saw the whole building just collapse on us, killing us all. What are you talking about its still standing? I noticed the building started to crack. Then the whole building just collapsed killing everyone inside. OH MY GOD!!!
ONE MONTH LATER
Everyone at my school wouldnt even talk to me. Paul just started talking to me and followed me home.
Why did that happen to me Paul?
What?
Why did I have that premonition? I didnt do anything. I just woke up and went on that bus. I didnt want this to happen. It just did.
Maybe you just thought about something that caused it to happen.
Youre right! I kept thinking of that roller coaster accident. Wait the camera
David rushed to his room and grabbed the camera. He showed Paul the pictures and videos. He couldnt believe what he just saw.
I dont get it. How could this video be on here, if none of us stepped into that building? asked Paul. Then there was a glitch on the camera and it froze where David was recording the address. David stared at it for a while.
Oh my god! he rushed to the computer.
What are you doing?
That number. 36. Remember when the TV went on in the classroom. Well this is the address to the building. David went online and searched the number 36. I got something.
The number was related to several other accidents.
Several years ago 3 students had vivid premonitions. One was a plane crashing, a huge pile up and the other, a roller coaster accident. Moments later their premonition came true. But what happened after is the real story. The people who survived the accidents started dying one by one in the order they were meant to in the premonition.
When the plane exploded 36 bodies were found in the water. After the highway pile up there was a count of 36 cars totaled. And 36 carts were thrown off the roller coaster. Not even our best experts could explain these horrible accidents
So even though we survived youre so called vision. Were still going to die? Asked Paul. David nodded.
But I dont get the order. David grabbed the camera and looked at the video. It showed the order they walked into the building. Patricia was first. Oh my god! Patricia was the first to die in my premonition, then Mr. Hernandez and so on. We got to warn her now.
So youre saying that even though we escaped your vision that were still going to die? asked Patricia.
Yes. Why does this seem that you dont believe me? said David.
Because this is complete BS! Im not going to waste my time hearing something that isnt true. She went into her room. Kristin followed.
Man why cant they just listen? screamed David. Paul and David sat in the living room. A slight wind filled the room with coldness. Paul got up and tried closing the window. A gust of wind poured in causing several things to turn on the TV. It was already on channel 36. Paul and David just looked at each other. It was showing a car crashing into a pole making it fly across the street.
This feels weird. I havent felt like this since that one day. David and Paul went into the next room.
I forgot to tell you guys. You got to be aware of the number 36. If you see this number watch out. David noticed some paper flying around. He then looked out the window. A car was going out of control. It crashed into Patricias fence causing a pole to fly into the wall. The pole then went through her head. AHHHHHHHHHHHH. Blood splashed on all their faces.
The ambulance ordered no one to step into that house. We got to warn everybody! said David
Kristin called everybody to go to her house. Everyone showed except Rob. Wheres Rob? asked Paul. He didnt answer his phone so hes not coming. Well then lets go to him. I think hes next
Everybody drove in Davids SUV. They stopped right in front of Robs house. You guys go ahead. This is my favorite song. Tom blasted his I-pod. Rachael knocked but no one answered. Rob peeked through the window telling them to go around.
So youre saying Im next. And this so called order is saying so. Youre joking right? David shook his head. Prove it! David grabs the camera and shows Paul.
Oh my god! Mr. Martinez was right in front of Rob. You were supposed to be next in the building but Tom cut in front of you along with Rachael! said David. So what are you saying? says Richard. David looks out the window. Toms next!
Everyone runs to the door but it wouldnt open. Apparently the door was stuck. A truck was speeding down and they noticed it wasnt slowing down.
NO BRAKES!!! A man was waving his hands back and fourth. There was some lose, thin, metal rods on the top of his truck. Everybody was pounding on the windows to get Toms attention. Rachael grabbed a chair and broke the window. The speeding truck slammed into Davids SUV causing the rods to break through the glass. Rachael climbed out the window and opened the door where Tom was sitting. AHHHHHHH! The rods went through his head. Two of them impaled his forehead and one through his eye.
Rachael already knew she was next. She took off running down the street. Richard went after her. The rest followed. She stopped right in front of the traffic. As she was about to jump, Richard grabbed her. Cars swerved hitting a stop sign. It knocked over hitting an electric box. The pole was touching Rachael. Rob grabbed the pole and then there was an explosion from the box. He got electrocuted causing him to die.
Rachael was supposed to be next! yelled David. But from Rob grabbing the pole, it skipped her and went to the person who was next in the order.
The next day at school everybody was being aware of everything. After school David walked home alone. Some tall, black man whispered my name.
How do you know my name? said David
I know a lot about you. And I also know that you were the one who foresaw that collapsing building.
Well its obvious that you saw me on the news!
No. I just know. All I know is that you cant stop death. Once death has found you, it wont stop. Itll keep going and going until its satisfied.
But what I dont get is that how is that the camera and the video are there, but I took them when I get off the bus. And when I woke up from that vision the stuff was already on there and I never got off the bus.
There is a perfectly good explanation for that. The building was the big key point in the vision. See you recorded the building right?
Right!
Well then what did you do with the camera afterwards?
I left it on the bus!
See there it is. The camera wasnt meant to be left on the bus. You see, you leaving the camera on the bus, messed up deaths entire plan. Once you intervene in deaths plan a whole different thing happends, you really got to pay attention to all sorts of signs!
Like the one on the TV?
Yes! Just be careful because death never forgets.
The man started walking a different direction and disappeared.
When David walked home, Kristin, Rachael, Paul, Richard and George were waiting at his house.
You guys we all cant be together! We got to be separate. If one of us dies, the others who are next will die immediately. Itll happen like a chain. David decided to take them all home.
Kristin and Rachael lived near each other. David stopped at a busy stoplight. Richard kept talking about how it was horrible how the rest died over and over again. I had enough of this! yelled Kristin as she stepped out of the car. Kristin get in the car! screamed Rachael. No! Why should I? Im next am I? David just stared at her. Wow this is awesome! David felt a chill down his spine. He turned around and there was a speeding car coming towards Kristin. KRISTIN LOOK OUT! The car slams right into Kristin causing her to fly and land right in a construction zone. David and the rest rushed to her. She was still breathing. Oh my god Kristin. Ok were going to get you to a hospital! said Rachael. Richard pointed to a car that was going out of control. It hit a ramp and it flew in the air. Everybody got out of the way except for Kristin and Rachael. The car crushed them both.
Richard ran up to the car trying to push it off of them. He then fell to the floor crying. He then looked up and noticed that the license plate to the car read 3636.
5 MONTHS LATER
For some reason everybody completely forgot about all the deaths from the past. It was the month where the seniors graduated.
Hey David you excited for the party? asked Paul. Richard and George were with him. Of course I am!
Ill catch up with you guys later. I have to finish my final exam in Chemistry. If I dont I wont graduate. Said Richard. David watched Richard go into the classroom. A teacher was holding stacks of paper and accidentally ran into a student holding a basketball. The ball bounced into the room. Richard was holding some acid and tripped over the ball. The acid flew into the air and landed on his face, eating it up. He left the bun set burner on and some paper flew on top of it causing a huge fire. The fire led to some other toxic chemicals.
George was walking to the student parking lot while passing the science lab. The lab exploded causing George to fly to his car and die. The rest of the school caught on fire. David and Paul ran to try and put out the fire. David saw the ambulance truck park right by the front door. He noticed it was leaking oil. The oil found its way to the fire and the truck exploded. Paul was near it and he was on fire. David grabbed the fire extinguisher and then the building exploded. AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
David couldnt believe he had another vision. His eyes were watery. Whoa David whats wrong? Oh my god! Paul already knew what had happened. The school. Its going to explode. Paul noticed that teacher was struggling with the papers. He accidentally ran into the student holding the basketball. David stopped the basketball from rolling into the lab. He noticed that Richard slipped on some papers and the acid he was holding spilled on the bun set burner that was on, causing the room to explode.
Moments later the ambulance came accidentally running into George and killing him. The truck parked near the entrance like David saw in the vision. He and Paul ran outside. Woo-hoo David we beat it! screamed Paul. David started to remember that there was one more explosion in his vision. The school exploded but Paul jumped to the side. Huge pieces of the wall flew into the air. David moved to the side and the wall fell on the exact spot where he was standing. He started walking backwards. DAVID WHERE ARE YOU GOING? WE BEAT THIS. WERE NOT GOING TO DIE! said Paul. The wall behind him then fell, crushing Paul underneath.
THE END
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