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| Final Destination 3 |
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| POSTED Monday , August 07, 2006 05:58:37 PM |
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OOC: I kind of based the characters off friends, and I made a different main character than my name. Anyway, I hope you enjoy. And for those who think it's silly, its based off a horror movie, what do you expect?
Katie K. - Hot Redhead, popular but nerdy.
Pierce N.- Cocky and funny
Sam A. - Most Suicidal. Expected to die soon
Earl M. - Biggest Clown
Mali U. - Skater/ "Female Player"
Scottie L. - Biggest Jock, expected to go Pro.
Erika K. - Most popular.
OOC: Now I'm been thinking of a huge accident, I would use a roller coaster but that's taken. Next big thing, a boat accident.
Katie K. Is an 18 year old Senior ready to graduate at BDHS. She has a large group of friends but little does she know, something deadly is going to happen. The story begins here.
It was a late night, very late night. This was
the night before her big day, her cruise trip.
On the ship known as the,
"SS Meno Johnson." Her Boyfriend scottie
ask, "Ready for the big trip tomorrow?"
"Well yeah of course scottie." Scottie got up,
he was ready to leave, after all, it was 2:00
In the morning. Sneaking out the side
Window scottie was on his way home. Katie
turned around under her covers. She
Rested her head on her pillow. She looked
at the small ship on the shelf at the side.
She stared at the ship. Then her eyes
closed. As she was falling asleep. She
opened her eyes and to her visions the ship
had shattered. Then snapped back to
reality. Noticing the ship was perfectly fine
and still. Katie fell asleep. That next day
around 3:30 katie and all her friends were
at the ship. Erika was talking to Mali until
her eyes had wandered and what had she
seen? Sam, "Ew! What?! Why are you here?
Most of you geeks didn't sign up for this."
Sam had turned around, "You do under-
stand, I don't have fun speaking with sluts."
"Ah!" Erika had said. She walked closer and
smacked him across the face. "Don't ever
speak to me again." Pierce had looked to
the situation. "Man Sam, you need to shut
your short little elven self up, you know you
can't go call Erika a slut without her insulting
you even more. Thats why you're so
suicidal!" Pierce shouted, Sam had gotten
angry, punched him, but it didn't do
anything, Pierce was a rather bigger taller
guy, and Sam was only at average height.
so, the punch wouldn't hurt that much. "Sh
You don't need anyone to find out. About
that." Pierce laughed, "Shut up, everyone
knows." Scottie patted him on the shoulder
"Hey, Pierce. I gotta have a word with you
about something." Pierce turned around, "
What is it? I'm busy you see. Trying to
teach my challenged friend how to grow."
"You're not even tall. . ." Pierce replied, "I'm
5'10, Sam is 5'6. How am I short? Plus,
Scottie, it's not my fault you're 6'5. You
Sasquatch." Scottie had pulled him back
from the crowd a bit, "I'm going to ask Katie
to marry me this summer, soon she'll be my
fiance, I got her this necklace, you think this
will work?" Pierce laughed, "Oh! It will steal
her little heart!" he taunted scottie
sarcasticlly, "I don't know, don't bring that
on me. Maybe it will, maybe it won't. I just
would stick to girlfriend boyfriend right now."
Katie had walked up to Scottie, "So what
are you two talking about?" Scottie turned
around and kissed her. Pierce walked off.
"So how do you feel about this ship? It's
going to be great!" She slightly smiled.
Katie turned her eyes away from his. She
saw 2 little boys playing with ships.
Screaming, "Captain! Ship Down! They're all
going to die! They're going to drown!" The
boy had slamed the ship on the table. She
jumped as soon as the ship hit the table,
"Yeah, I'm not sure about fun or great. But
it will be exciting." Scottie laughed, "Are you
kidding me! This is the ship ride of our life
time!" Katie went over to talk to Mali, "You
excited about the ship?" mali replied, "Who
cares, I don't even feel like going. I'm just
chasing down him!" She pointed to the
new kid. His name was Tyler. "Think he
likes me!" Earl had overheard them talking,
"Man Pierce, this sucks. She's always after
one guy to the next. Eventually guys are
going to get tired of Mali. So how many
guys laid her out recently? Hm, 4, 5?"
"Earl shut up, you have a girl friend forget
about her." OOC: Now it gets to the ship, sorry for the rants wanted yo uto get to know the characters.
Katie had walked onto the ship, along side
with mali and Scottie. Mali turned to Tyler,
"I'll go on the front deck with you if you'd
like at Lunch time. It'll be a blast!" Pierce
shaked his head and walked on. He put
his arm around Erika, but she moved it off.
"Look Pierce, you want me back? To bad, I
like someone else right now? Okay!"
"Wait how many is someone, see someone
isn't sometwo, three, or four, it's one
person." Pierce walked off. They all handed
their tickets in. Each ticket had a number.
Katie had ticket number 7, Pierce 2, Sam 3,
Earl 4, Mali 5, Scottie 6, and Erika 1. The
The tickets went up to 25, since there were
25 students on the cruise. Pierce got on,
"Man Freshman year, **** I wouldn't of got
on this thing. At that time I could barely
swim." Sam laughed at pierce. They came
aboard the ship. Very large ship. They got
their rooms and everything that they
needed. It came lunch time and everyone
sat at the tables with their groups. All 25
students. They all were talking and having
fun but one. Katie had a weird feeling, a
chill down her spine. And little did all of the
students know that there was a big problem
underneath the ship. The engine was
shaking and one of the blades of the moter
at the bottom of the ship had broken off.
The blade flew off skid backwards and sliced
a hole straight through the lower area of
ship. The material had ben cut, ripped
through. This was a big problem. Though
that was just baby steps to the real
disaster that would ruin their lives.
The thing that led to the flood in the ship
was the Electric generator. While the
workers were under, and the man simply
had over heated the generator. It went out
of controll, the amount of heat just
increased, one man noticed the small pieces
of the wet motor in the side. He yanked it
out, he was shocked. he knew that the
ship would flood. One man ran up and tried
to tell the captain that a piece of the motor
cut through the side. So the man asked,
"Toss me the piece." The man had tossed
the other worker the pieces. And it glided
across and a piece had sliced through the
generator. And bam! That section had
blown. The captain noticed the bang, along
with all the students. The power had went
out and a huge section of the ship that was
needed went missing. The captain said, "
We need power to get us back." He jamed
the key in and tried to start the engine, but
it wouldn't work. Till he twisted it hard as
possible. And bam! The motor had just
been out of control. The impact of the water
had shaken up the areas. Energy from the
explosion was so immense. The water had
risen and the teens saw some of it rush.
It swiped out a small group of teenagers
and the rest had ran to the other side.
Leaving to the outside of the ship, as the
water had destroyed the room previously.
Kids got knocked out the side. Pierce being
one of them. He got knocked over the
railing and bam! Flew over. He held on to
the side. The water impact was so hard
it knocked him and the railing straight into
The other side of the ship. Smash! Bones
broken and the water impact was strong.
A sword or statue from the other side had
broken and smacked Sam. It vertically
smashed his body straight off the ship.
The students finally knew this wasn't a safe
spot to be at. They ran. And as soon as
Earl went along with them. Into the other
side, the water had broken an upper level
window. That fell striaght down, cut his
head. Mali screamed. The tables and chairs
came sliding down. Broke through the glass
and a collision occured, a lot of the tables
and chairs fell upon Mali. And she got
knocked straight out, and flew upon a
broken railing and was impaled. Scottie,
Katie, and Erika were the last 3 survivors.
Scottie had slipped from the water. And a
huge shandalear had been right above him,
before he could move the shandalear had
fallen. It had killed him. Blood everywhere
around the ship now. From all the deaths,
Katie and Erika were left. As Erika was
getting ready to run, a bed set from the
upper levels fell from the top from a broken
window. IT had landed on Erika. Katie was
alone, and it was too late for anything. She
prayed and begged. Until a rush of water
had came at her as she turned. And as
soon as she woke. Her premonition was
over. "Don't go on the ship! We'll die!
Don't do it!" Everyone turned to her. Erika
looked at her. "What? Well I'm already on,
and I didn't pay the money for no reason."
Pierce stood up and looked around, "Scottie,
someone put a muzzel on your girlfrined
please, she talks to much." Scottie turned
around and pushed Pierce, "Shut up." They
get into a slight physical fight till Sam breaks
it up. But fails. They get taken off the ship,
Erika is still talking to Katie, "Look you're not
going to ruin this. Okay, if you do, you're
dead!" Erika was dragged off the ship, "You
can't threaten people on a field trip." She
kicked and screamed. And got lose. "Katie!
You're dead!" Pierce and Scottie were still
going at it, Pierce asked, "What's wrong
with you! And you're crazy Girlfriend! This is
bull, you can't just blow hundreds of dollars
cause some girl is screaming, Oh my God! The Ship's going to wreck! " Scottie
shook his head, "Shut up. Cause of you I
never got to see what's wrong." Pierce
replied, "Nothings wrong, are you that
stupid? She's going crazy, looking for
attention. Joking, probably wanting to
laugh at everyone who got off." Scottie
said, "I thought you weren't like that, you
know her." Pierce said, "I did know her, and
I did know you." The cops came, "Alright,
each of you are going to tell me, what the
hell happened." Until BAM! They heard the
explosion from the generator, and saw the
ship begin to crash. They all were amazed,
as the vision had came true.
Three Days later. . .
Construction workers talking, "Well the
senior graduation comes tonight." "Yeah Al,
we have to make sure the lights are stable."
Al replied, "Well they should be. But they
are kind of lose. But that much electricity
can't knock off a light post." "Yeah, Al. It's
3:30, we're finally off." they left. It was
8:00 30 minutes to Graduation. Scottie was
on the phone, "Hey Katie, you going to
garduation?" Katie said feeling very dull,
"No, never, I don't need to. After that
disaster I can't think of showing my face."
Scottie shook his head, "Katie you have to
go, what else are you going to do?" Katie
just sighed, "Scottie shut up about it okay,
I'm not going, that's final!" She picked up
her year book and threw it, it smacked open
to one page. And a pencil from the top shelf
had fell directly on Erika's picture. She said,
"Scottie, I'll, call you back." Katie walked
closer to the picture. And tilted her head,
she got the same chill she had before.
Now it came 8:30, scottie looked around but
Katie was no where to be found. He sighed.
The names were called, and they passed his
girlfriends he knew she wasnt' there. Pierce
whispered to Scottie, "So where is she?"
"She's not here obviously, and don't speak
with me. You basically insulted her, and now
you wonder where she is. . ." Pierce
elbowed scottie. "You're dumb, it's not my
fault everyday girls don't go screaming that
I'll die when I'm trying to have fun." Every
name had been called, the principal had
been speaking. and he said, "Now the light
show shall begin as Class of 2010 has a
special spark. Hit the lights." Above
everyone on the field. The lights had been
turned on and they said in red letters
2010. Everyone was near, and under
The letters 2010 were Erika and
Scottie. Bam, the screws were lose
And as soon as it was turned on,
Bam! The 1 flies off and the 2010
Crushes Erika and Scottie.
OOC: Yeah that part sucked, had
To fix things up.
Two days later someone
Knocks on Katies door.
She answers, Pierce says,
Youre not alone. . .
I dont have time for this. . .
She replied. Look, youre
Going to start listening to
People. My friend died
And I think I have
Explanation. Look
Four years ago a girl
Had a premonition of
A deadly rollercoaster
Event and the 7 survivors
Got off, and died in the
Exact order they died
On the roller coaster
So I think thats what
Is going on here.
Katie shook her head
Erika wasnt first in
The premonition, you
Were. And she died first,
Along with Scottie. Pierce tilted his head,
"Well maybe it's, reversed!"
To Be continue, I don't feel like finishing this hthing.. . .
Plus I need positive feedback to see how good it is.
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| REPLIED Sunday , August 20, 2006 11:15:18 AM |
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| REPLIED Thursday, August 24, 2006 09:55:45 PM |
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| REPLIED Friday , December 01, 2006 06:16:07 AM |
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