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Lala12345
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POSTED Sunday , February 19, 2006 09:09:22 AM Delete post? (Moderator ONLY)
I'm curently working on Chapter Five and making the others. And I'm stuck on a problem. Can you help?

Should Shawnie be rescued? or should she stay on the white witch's side for a few more days?(And then have Tucker come and save her life.)

I like choice two a lot but it's just an opion. Please help.

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REPLIED Sunday , February 19, 2006 10:33:28 AM Delete post? (Moderator ONLY)
It's really up to you. Where do you want to take the story? What do you want to do with it? What do you want the end result to be? What would your characters do?

People find love! People lose it!!!!

ok... sorry. I got carried away quoting adaptation. but, seriously ask yourself those questions.


There are times when I feel guilty...the question is, do I feel guilty enough to change?
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REPLIED Sunday , May 21, 2006 12:34:30 PM Delete post? (Moderator ONLY)
I'd like to help, but I have no idea who your character is. Are the first chapters of your story already on the web? 'Cause it would be easier to understand if we could read the beginning...


For those who don't know me (which means for most of you), I have to tell you I'm the galaxy's biggest Gollum fan! If anyone else thinks he's cute, please write to me so I can see I'm not the only one and show my friends that I'm not totally crazy...
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REPLIED Monday , May 22, 2006 03:20:40 PM Delete post? (Moderator ONLY)
Yes they're on here but I still haven't got Chapter five set up yet but, I'm trying.

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REPLIED Monday , May 22, 2006 03:42:54 PM Delete post? (Moderator ONLY)
Maybe write it like something really terrible happens to her... like she is killed or something. Make the other characters who know her think she's no longer alive. They cry, they reflect. Maybe a love interest is on the brink of revenge. Then, a few chapters down the track, she comes back in magnificent glory to kick some ass.

Build up tension, suspense, and give it all a swift twisting kick in the pants.



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